THE ONE... about the Business Man
Was it GOOD:
In my own words, it's an all right film. In away it didn't capture my attention and I didn't want to watch more of the film. By the end of the film I got completely lost, but it was funny seeing how the actors tried to act and how they were trying to beat them up. It was entertain in a funny kind of way, but the storyline wasn't so crash hot.
IMPROVEMENT:
1. Add dialogue or improve on the dialogue because you hardly can hear what they are saying
2. Outline the characters more clearly
3. Outline the story
4. Delete some shots because it made it too slow. For example, who he's getting into the car and when he turns the ignition on. 'We get that he's in the car and he is driving away...'
COMPARE:
Honestly I can't compare. I don't mean to sound harsh and a b**ch or a spoiled brat, but I believe that my film was a better make than this one. Reasons. In mine...:
1. Better understanding of the storyline (I don't know, I'm guessing)
2. Can hear dialogue clearly
3. We have the option of two days of film the same things, but using different angles, lighting and things like that. So we had lots of options and all of us could choose from these options and it was good, that's why ours are so different because we could build the 'Park Scene' differently, for example.
THE ONE... with the Spells
Was it GOOD:
Bloody Hell it was AMAZING!! Gosh, there isn't any words to describe how good that film was!! I know that is mean, but it's the truth! They put so much effort and time in making this film and it's totally amazing! The storyline was amazing because you followed it and it caught your attention, which is the main thing!
IMPROVEMENTS:
I don't believe that there are many improvements that need to be made because everything was down well. Except
o There was a part were one of the characters was walking upstairs. They should've cut that part down
Nothing else!! :D
COMPARE:
Okay this film is way better than my edited version. This is because (for my version) I had a view sharp editing spots in the kitchen scene. Viewing my version of the film again, I notice that it's really sharp and harsh when they are flipping from Susie to the mother. It isn't smooth or anything like in this film, which is really good. They did have any special effects that changes the scenes or anything, it's just natural. For mine I had few special effects that change from one scene to the next. On the whole there's was better in the way they connecting to the audience and they really showed how they describe the genre of their film. From the moment the film start with the first scene, I was entranced by the film and the only way that I was entranced was that they engaged and they drew the audience into the film and it made them feel scared about the spells, the red and black background and the clocks. From this you can pick out the clear detail in what the genre is about and that's why it went so well with many other students.
The reason why mine isn't as great as this is because we didn't really know what our genre was and we didn't have that in our minds because we just filmed and for them, it seemed that the genre was stuck to their minds and they followed onto their genre. We just filmed and we didn't add in anything in to enhance our genre or anything like that. The story was amazing and it was just WOW!!
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